Draft

In fact, learning a new language stays always challenging to every person. However, English 111 class has taught me many things that I never thought I will do it. The first assignment that we did a reading response to Anne Lamott’s “Shitty First Draft” has taught me that people learn from their mistakes, and nobody is perfect. Lamott says, “Almost all good writing begins with terrible first efforts. You need to start somewhere. Start by getting something -- anything -- down on paper.”After…

How phones effect your everyday life Rough Draft For many of us, myself included, our cell phone screens are the last thing we check before we go to bed at night and the first thing we look in the morning. I see people texting and driving and almost every day I am behind someone at a red light who is looking down when the light turn greens. When you eat out, it is completely normal to see patron's cell phones at the table by their beverage. Also normal to see them checking their device during…

In the article ‘The Draft would Compel Us to share the Sacrifice’ author Charles Rangel says that drafting people into the military would help us share the sacrifice of the war effort when needed. This is not true as a result of forcing us into the military we are inclined to not have a passion to assist our country for the reason that serving our country was not our choice. Moreover, when we are not motivated to achieve anything we are more inclined that we will complete it with less effort.…

On my first draft, A time when I was wrong Essay 1, I wrote mainly about how I was wrong and about the time I was wrong without explaining the detail on how I was wrong, and the effect my decision brought me later in life. I wrote about the way I gave the news of dropping out of school to my mother. I didn’t add a dialogue, I just described the event without any interaction. My second draft, the revised version, was an improvement to my first draft. I added a dialogue that discussed how and…

Argument ESSAY There has always been an argument about whether major sports leagues should draft players out of high school. Truthfully, they should be focusing on college and getting a degree before they consider hitting the professional playing field. Should these growing adolescents continue their education and graduate, or should they focus on the field? For young adults, college is an important step into the real world, whereas for student athletes, it should be extra important. According…

The Best Cupcakes Ever Rough Draft In the world that we live in today has more than 50 thousand cupcake recipes. Some people can make good cupcakes, but I make the best! Cupcakes is one thing in this world; that not everybody can make because of the steps in the recipe. My recipe can either make or break someone from baking cupcakes. Steps can be easy or hard to make some cupcakes, but I am going to show you how to make a perfect batch of cupcakes; just simply follow these steps, preparing,…

What would happen if Major League Baseball held a league-wide draft where every player in each organization became available and each General Manager could choose a total of five players to steal from other teams; but if two GMs selected the same player, he would remain with his current team and GMs were not allowed to communicate with each other? Earlier this year, SB Nation conducted this game theory simulation by having 30 of their writers act as the GMs for each team. The most intriguing…

Rhetorical Critique on an excerpt of the book “Bird by Bird” written by Anne Lamott. The story has the broad topic of the first draft. Lamott decides to approach the topic and says why first drafts are important. Lamott expresses her affinity to the topic by explaining her past experience and attributes to them by explaining her process. Many people don’t like to write first drafts but after reading the story they at least will understand the importance of them. This leads to Lammot’s approach…

Initial Draft In the initial rhetorical analysis draft of Scott Jaschik’s “Winning Hearts and Minds in War on Plagiarism,” I noticed that there are some mistakes in specifying the audience, integrating sources, making a deep analysis, and organizing the structure of the paper. The writer of the draft could have made more analysis than summary, which is explaining the effectiveness of Jaschik’s use of the referred rhetorical choices. To give an example of illustrations as rhetorical choice,…

requires following steps and many rough drafts to accomplish your goals by writing something that’s worth reading. The rough draft is just that, a rough copy of the paper your writing, that you can…