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Abdullah Alhassan November 18, 2014 Rough Draft: Is Digital Photography Considered Art? Art is defined as, “something that is created with imagination and skill and that is beautiful or that expresses important ideas or feelings”, according to Merriam-Webster dictionary (merriam-webster.com/dictionary/art). When art is a subject that is argued about, imagination and inspiration must be considered. “At what point does something become art?” is a question asked in a book called, What is Art? - 27…

“This is pure garbage. Was I drunk when I wrote this?” These are both common thoughts that cross my mind when reviewing and analyzing one of my drafts. The art of writing, by no means, is a simple task, and nearly every individual, at some point, encounters this obstacle in their lifetime. For some this skill may come easy, creating literature from scrap within hours is a simple task. On the other hand, most find this process extremely difficult; thinking of new ideas, words and sentences in…

Writing the first draft of a paper is definitely the most difficult part of the writing process for me. Perhaps, this is because pulling together a piece of writing out of thin air (or less seemly places) is not easy. Even as I type this one page response, I struggle to connect my thoughts and ideas in a cohesive and meaningful way. My writing process generally involves me thinking, over thinking, and then thinking some more, before anything even makes it past my fingertips. Writing badly on…

Rough Draft:Colonial Africa When most people think about Africa, they can about Ebola, the Sahara Desert, or the traditional clothing. In the novel, Things Fall Apart, Chinua Achebe adds a lot to our knowledge on Africa in real life.The British wanted to rule Africa, so they could loot their resources. When, the British took control of Africa, they divided regions based off of the resources found there, not the people that lived in each one.The British had made their opinion about Africans,…

The Jacket (Rough Draft) I threw my books on my bed and approached a jacket as if it were a beautiful stranger. That jacket was on my bed and it was one amazing black leather jacket with three silver belts made of metal. Then I yelled, “Mom is this my jacket?” “Yes” my Mother said. I screamed and threw my other old guacamole colored jacket on the floor that was saying “Put me back on.” I was so happy that old thing was out of my site. I ran around my room with that black leather jacket then…

and describe three strengths in this draft? You gave wonderful explanation at the beginning of your story. It was a nice way to introduce the characters and the setting of your story. The story was extremely inspirational and had a wonderful message that most people could relate. The story was short (under 1000 words), but still had all the good elements of storytelling. (Your grammar was also superb!) 2. Identify and describe three weaknesses in this draft? Your story was really interested,…

Can you hear that? Listen real close……Hear it? Peace and serenity across Islanders social media. Everyone might as well be sitting around a campfire, roasting marshmallows and singing Kumbaya. Well, for one night at least. The Islanders eased tensions among the Barclays Center faithful and within their own locker room with last night’s 4-2 win over the sinking Vancouver Canucks in Brooklyn. To add to the good vibes was Jason Chimera and Andrew Ladd finally getting off the snide and scoring…

Maybe you think the Winnipeg Jets are garbage but listen here, listen good, and listen up. Pause your 21 savage, tell your boys to simmer down, and put down your phone. I’m going to explain to you why the Winnipeg Jets will be the most established team in the NHL in the next couple of years. The Winnipeg Jets are a great team because of the different skill sets of the players on the team. You probably heard the Winnipeg Jets are straight up trash but please hear me out. The Jets currently have a…

Gurwinder Singh September 20, 2017 Outline Portfolio Draft- Time Warner Cable Introduction: Formerly called Time Warner Cable now better known as Spectrum, is an American tv and internet cable company. The company was first formed in 1992 by Time Inc. tv cable company. The company offers their services in about 42 different states and regions. They have several different positions offered at this job. There is corporate, management, customer service, network operations, sales and operating,…

get involved in the war. Some people saw no point of the war and lacked interest. Forty three thousand of the 10 million people drafted refused to fight, which resulted in 6,000 people being arrests. As well as that 350,000 people were involved in draft evasion. The treatment of the enlisted men and officers varied depending on their appearance for the lack of better word. There was barely any organized opposition to oppose the war. The only group that opposed was the Socialist Workers Party. In…