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is the “Run on Sentence.” This is often referred to as the grandfather of all mistakes (Miller & Whitehead, 2015).” Most people believe that it is impossible to write long sentences and be grammatically create. Truth to be told, it is possible. A primary example is legal papers, where the sentences are continuously long for paragraphs and sometimes pages. Other examples includes military manuals, which are succinct and explicit. Unfortunately, many of the times run on sentences are written…

If the first sentence were taken alone, I would not expect what is to follow. However, the first three sentence correlate with each other. I think taking all three should be taken in together. The third sentence, in particular, is the actual topic sentence. The interesting thing about the first two sentences is that they unite Chief Joseph and General Howard, as they both feel the same thing. This is an interesting choice, as it is each other (I assume) that they have fought. Grammatically, it…

words creates good sentence structure (Grellier & Goerke, 2010). Using parallel words in each sentence can help the reader better understand the ideas (Grellier & Goerke, 2010). In my writing am have developed this skill from feedback I received from smart thinking (www.smarthinking.com) earlier in my degree. I understand the use of the same or a similar word makes my writing more understandable. In my writing I find it easy to remember the right use of apostrophes, I use simple phrase from…

Change. As simple as the word may seem, there are many distinct contexts in which the word may be used. This essay will focus on one of Oxford dictionary's many definitions stating that change is a verb meaning “To turn (a thing) into (also to) something else; to convert into”. The inevitability of change is a concept in which Ovid’s characters struggle frequently with. The complete change in form of concrete subjects within the metamorphoses are often the root of the stories’ chaotic tension.…

has risen drastically in the last ten years. Men, women, boys, and girls are being convicted; for a numerous amount of reasons. With this being stated, I raise the question of: How many out of those who were and are convicted actually deserved the sentence received? In 2006, a man was sentenced to eighteen years in prison for being an enforcer for a gang called the Terminators in Bridgeport, Connecticut. This man brutally fought with competitor gangs, sold heroin, and killed a potential witness.…

am given a topic to write about I think it is harder to make the paper interesting and enjoyable to read. When it comes writing I have a few of struggles that one day I wish I could improve on. The three writing areas I struggle with the most are sentence fluency, grammatical errors, and word choice. To make my writing better I will continue revise and edit my papers. Grammar is something that you need to repeatedly practice and I believe that should help with fixing grammatical errors. To…

reader, or show them, by immersing them into the story. The latter shows that the author has given consideration to the audience and paid respect to them (Tunnell, 2008). Wild (2013) has achieved this with the beautiful book “The Treasure Box”. The sentence “It is rarer than rubies, more splendid than silver, greater than gold” (parra. 6) describes the only book undamaged by the library fire. Wild could have told us “This book is important,” but she shows just how special this book is by…

access to all white house events. According to Orwell the author can remove enjoyed and change has to had. This will make the sentence less bias towards Eric Schmidt also. In the same sentence it is stated “not counting large meetings and social events like state dinners.”, this is a redundant statement for as we do not need to know that he also attended these events. The sentence will then read “Eric Schmidt had virtual open door access to the white house during the Obama administration,…

mistrusting nature. After this loss of innocence, Knowles further suggests that people make immense sacrifices in order to fight their fake enemy--testing the extent of their selfishness. Similar ideas continue to develop through the Knowles' unique sentence…

Michelle was using new words every day and began speaking in longer sentences. Some examples of her sentences were, “I like to play with my doll house and my dolls”, “Baby Nick is crying because he is hungry”,” I like donuts but I don’t like carrots”, “After I take my nap I get to go to my ballet class”. These are good examples of Brow’s stage V because the sentences are conjoined sentences by conjunction words (Shulman, & Singleton, 2010). Michelle was still attending her gym…