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writing areas I struggle with the most are sentence fluency, grammatical errors, and word choice. To make my writing better I will continue revise and edit my papers. Grammar is something that you need to repeatedly practice and I believe that should help with fixing grammatical errors. To…

As the years go on, the world changes more and more. It seems that one thing everybody enjoyed last year is now completely irrelevant. Has the world changed for the better? I believe the world has done so. Technology and sciences are improving to make the world a better place. We have better technology to save lives and educate. We also have equality for genders and race. Earth today is not the Earth it was many years ago. The world is much better now than it was 60 years ago because of…

No one in this earth is perfect but there is always room for improvement. There are millions of new things to be learned and we can find always a new and fresh ideas that is generated from human mind every day. Regardless of how good and precious our life is now but we can still make it better or more precious for tomorrow. No matter what love, joy and fulfillment we have now but there is alway a way and room from improvement and to make it better or more charming for tomorrow. Yesterday is…

During my first semester of college I have learned a lot of information. Though, one of the most important things I learned was better writing techniques. From the first assignment to now, there has been a lot of improvement in my writing skills. These skills will help me in the future, not just in other writing courses but in all of my courses. Some of the specific things I have become stronger in include: argumentative writing, being more detailed, citing sources correctly, and using a more…

Throughout the whole semester I had hit many walls that have kept me from doing better but, I have improved in many of my writings whether it 's small errors or large. I am beginning to demonstrate competence in the SLOs which are, research and reading, essay composition, and polish and formatting. I chose two specific essays which I didn 't do as well as I should have but, has shown a lot of improvement. In these two essays i have shown improvement in organization, grammatical/mechanical…

The discussion about if the internet can make a writer better is still in debating. The idea of the internet making the writer better is not a bad idea. For instance, the websites could correct grammar errors, sentence structure errors, wrong word choice, run-on sentences, passive voice sentences, and punctuation errors. The websites will be able to notice the errors because it's more advanced and has the knowledge of grammar and literature. The reasons why the internet can make the writer…

Personally, I believe that I am becoming a better version of myself. In addition, I can not promise to be the best version of myself since I do not even know what is the best version of me. However, I do learn everyday and hopefully I can learn to improve from my experience and become better. Furthermore, I know that I have become a better version of myself is when I can look by at my actions and what I have done to be proud. Nonetheless, the actions that I take should demonstrate improvements…

creating the light bulb and allowing light during the night. I believe it is better to be misunderstood by people when you are brainstorming the next big thing, but sometimes it is hard, because nobody understands or gets what you are trying to do. “The stars awaken a certain reverence, because though always present, they are inaccessible; but all natural objects make a kindred impression, when the mind is open to their influence. Nature never wears a mean appearance.” Written by Ralph…

taught many points of advanced English and explained each concept and format thoroughly. English 111 has helped better myself and other students for upcoming college classes because it takes clear and in-depth looks at the formats and sciences behind English and paper writing. The course has personally helped me gain a better understanding of the mechanics of writing and allowed me to grasp a better writing skill than when I had initially started. The class itself holds many benefits and has…

Topic: Every Child Deserves a Chance for a Better Education. General Purpose: To persuade. Specific Purpose: To persuade my audiences beliefs and attitudes about why every child deserves a chance for a better education. Thesis Statement: Education is the essential tool that must be taken into consideration by everyone in order to succeed and to have a great and happy life. I. Introduction: A. Why should every child have a chance for education? B. Everyone at some point has seen highly…