did was very effective. As I wrote my essay, I included quotes and examples that Zinsser used through the book, to show prove of what I would state and why I stated it. Throughout my essay, I had many complications in trying to get my point across due to the fact that I had trouble understanding the concept of the essay myself. As my peers reviews would say I would talk about the reading…
Dear First Year Writing Assessment Committee: In this letter, I will explain my learning outcomes and experiences with my essays for English 1010. English 1010, defined by academic standards, is to develop in first-year college writers a deeper understanding of the complexities of writing through instruction and guided practice in the skills, processes, and strategies necessary for effective, successful writing. In my past semester of English 1010, I was able to demonstrate my abilities to…
An effective explanatory essay acquaints with the reader with a specific concept, or a major idea. That idea is then elaborated on. The essay titled Flow was much more effective in being educational and enjoyable. The flow of the information, pun intended, allowed the reader to focus much easier and to enjoy the reading while doing so. If I were to write an explanatory essay, I would use topics surrounding science. Flow by Clayton Strothers is a very well written explanatory essay. He goes…
I decided to write my myth on the creation of rain. While it may be simple and a basic concept, those were exactly the types of topics that the Native Americans tried to explain with their myths. As well, my myth incorporates all of the criteria that one must meet. By definition, a creation (or origin) myth is, “the accounts of the ways in which these supernatural agents formed the Earth and peopled it” (Carneiro). While in my myth the Earth already exists, the purpose of it is to explain how…
always wanted to better my writing but have never had the resources to do so until I got to the English 111 course with professor Alissa Bourbonnais. Through this course I have learned different skills and techniques that will help me with my writing process in the future. Our focus was on the expository outcomes; context, analysis, argument, and revising. Focusing on one outcome per…
In En 023 I have gained useful information that I will be using later in life. I have a much better understanding of the English writing now. Also I think that I've grown in many of my weak areas. My experience there has been amazing because I knew that this class was going to make me challenge myself to do my best. I now feel more confident going into a higher level English class and proving myself I can do it. My performance in the class can help show how much I've improved this semester.…
The English 102 class has been my interesting journey of developing some significant skills in essay writing. Writing is expressing feelings through words. Powerful writing capability helps authors to communicate efficiently and effectively. My semester begins with some struggling phases. Although we have completed our English 101 on writing entire semester in MLA format, I still lacked detail knowledge on it and worked on the element features of MLA format to master this format. As we research…
Amy Tan is an American writer who comes from a family originated from China. She was born on February 19th, 1952 in Oakland, a major West Coast Port city in California a few years after her parents immigrated from China. As a child, Tan was always pushed by her parents to get into the honor roll in school and to have a successful career by becoming a doctor or a concert Pianist. Her parents already had her life planned out for her. Since Tan’s parent’s were from China and neither ever attended…
Tamia Fluker’s Critique Professor Jaye gave his English 101 class an assignment to write a literacy narrative. The narrative’s objective was to discuss a time in one’s life that impacted their literacy growth. Tamia Fluker’s literacy narrative “A Day in the Life of a Reader” successfully met this objective. Although Fluker’s essay had a lot of positive areas there were a few areas in which she could improve. First, Fluker started with a title that did inform the reader’s on what she was writing…
The writing expected from college courses is one that most are unfamiliar with. Although students learn basic English skills throughout grade school and up to high school, most of the advanced steps are forgotten by the time the student is to enter college. Paired with this, are the nontraditional students, who haven’t studied advanced academic language for long periods of time. Professors are expecting students of all kinds of study to have a high academic vocabulary and high writing skill.…