Personal Narrative: The Goliath

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The Goliath is the tallest rollercoaster in six flags and I’m going to ride it. I am scared but today is my last day at six flags till next summer. Will I be able to ride the Goliath or will someone stop me.
The car pulled up to drop me and my friends off. We all headed to the front and waited. My friend Maysa had a flash pass to go straight to the Goliath, which was amazing because every time we came the line was long. As we waited for my mom I got bored, so I pulled out my phone. Carts from the Goliath zoomed pass us every 2 minutes. I have to admit that I’m scared, I mean the rollercoaster was huge. My mom was ready to eat so we all followed her in. After a delicious meal we split up.
Once we split up, me and my friends went straight to

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