Narrative Essay On My First Ride

When I first rode this it was the most terrifying thing ever. What was “this?” it’s Fahrenheit at Hershey Park. I first rode the ride in the summer of 2015. When I was ten about to go on to eleven. I rode with my mother, cousin, and friend. For privacy reasons we’ll call her Jenny. I showed courage when I first rode the ride, it might not be so much unlike other stories, like if someone saves someone from a burning house. I considered going back many times but I kept going, and I’m glad I did. I firstly, showed courage by going in the line in the first place, I was just barely tall enough to ride at the time so it was exciting, but mainly eerie. ‘Why did I choose to go on that ride if I was so scared?’ you ask. We had season passes that …show more content…
I was sitting next to my mother when we got on the ride. We started to move and the first thing there was the huge straight up-down hill. Gradually, we started moving up the hill, you’re stuck there for about 8 seconds till you start moving over the top turn. You’re staring right at the sun so you’re blinded and unknowing when the drop will start. I was ready to get off the ride till we started looking downward, in like most roller coasters you’re held there looking down for about 2-3 seconds, this was the most anxious part. We started to drop and I was afraid I was going to fall out, but within 5 seconds the drop it’s over, the drop part at least. We were going in all different directions, the coaster was about 30 seconds long, which most was about the hill. I finally got off alive. In conclusion, I showed courage by riding a roller coaster I never wanted to ride at all. With the huge drops, going straight up and down, and all the twists and turn, I was anxious to get on. I ended up finally pushing myself, with some help of others, to survive the coaster. I never want to go back on Fahrenheit and probably never will. It turns my stomach just to think about it. So, that’s the end of my story of