Narrative Essay About Adventure

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We were all incredibly bored and we were just sitting around not knowing what to do. Finally, being the five year olds we are, my friends and I decided to play “extreme” hide and seek together. We all went outside to establish the rules. The rules were not very descriptive, but basically we decided that we were going to play a different version of hide and seek, where everyone ran and then formed alliances or stayed on their own. Then, we had to try to find each other and “kill” the other with a long stick. Like I said, we act like five year olds. Anyway, we were at two of my friends dad’s house for a sleepover. His house is pretty much out in the middle of nowhere. There are fields and hills surrounding the house with tall grass and there …show more content…
We took off down the road, turning back now and then to make sure they weren’t following us. All I could hear were the sounds of our uneven breaths and the gravel crunching beneath our feet. We came across a big pile of rocks and I told her,

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“Let’s stop behind these rocks, so we have two ways to run.”
We stopped behind the rocks and Rachel looked one way while I looked the other way. From where we were, we could see the outlines of everyone else, so we could tell if they were coming for us. I swore that I saw Nicole look right at us, so I ducked down. I told Rachel my plan. If any of the others came from her side, she would yell and we would both take off in the opposition direction and vice versa. Then, I saw that the lights to the house went on. I was confused that they were looking for us in there because I knew we all said no hiding in the house. All of a sudden, I heard Nicole, April and Alie yelling at us. “Come out now guys, the game is over, this isn’t funny anymore!!” “I hear them calling for us,” I whispered, “Do you think they’re faking?” “I dunno Liz, it sounds like it” Rachel replied. “Maybe we should go an find em now.” I told Rachel. “Let’s just wait a little while longer.” She
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We were just sitting there unsure of what to do. It slowly got darker and colder out and it was getting harder to see the house. “Did you bring your cell phone?” I questioned Rachel
“No” she said back warily. “Neither did I.” I told her.
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I was already starting to get worried that maybe they stopped looking for us and weren’t going to come and get us, but now I was worried because we had no way of contacting them. I was really starting to consider going to find them now because it was getting so dark that I could hardly see the gravel road twenty feet in front of me. “I think we should go look for them now, it’s getting really dark.” I exclaimed
“I dunno what we should do. Maybe they’re just trying to scare us.” Rachel stated as if she was trying to convince herself.
We sat there thinking about what we should do next, when I heard them calling for us again. They were yelling the same thing, but this time it sounded more frantic, as if they really didn’t know where we

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