Over the course of this year I have been working hard to improve my supporting paragraphs. The supporting paragraphs of an essay are meant to be full of detail and information that supports the thesis. When I write a paper, I focus on the details and supporting content to improve the essay. I often conduct research and make notes before writing a paper. I have also found that writing an outline before writing the actual paper helps to organize my thoughts. Making an outline also helps to assure me that I have enough support for the claims I make throughout each paragraph. I want to make sure I am writing a strong, thorough, and detailed paper. “However, due to her obesity and insecurity, she is used to being alone and does not let people in her life. She excludes herself from activities because she is insecure about herself” (WP3, 5). This quote from one of my previous papers, shows how I used research and personal observations to provide the reader with a better understanding of Kate;s personality and behavior. Having done research before writing my paper greatly helped because I was able to make connections between the two texts in my paper. These connections were stated and made evident to the
Over the course of this year I have been working hard to improve my supporting paragraphs. The supporting paragraphs of an essay are meant to be full of detail and information that supports the thesis. When I write a paper, I focus on the details and supporting content to improve the essay. I often conduct research and make notes before writing a paper. I have also found that writing an outline before writing the actual paper helps to organize my thoughts. Making an outline also helps to assure me that I have enough support for the claims I make throughout each paragraph. I want to make sure I am writing a strong, thorough, and detailed paper. “However, due to her obesity and insecurity, she is used to being alone and does not let people in her life. She excludes herself from activities because she is insecure about herself” (WP3, 5). This quote from one of my previous papers, shows how I used research and personal observations to provide the reader with a better understanding of Kate;s personality and behavior. Having done research before writing my paper greatly helped because I was able to make connections between the two texts in my paper. These connections were stated and made evident to the