The writers also may add points or remove points from their body paragraphs. When I revise, I take into consideration the constructive criticism given by my classmates. In my mind I believe that my essay does not need revising because I believe that my essay does not need revising; however, this is not true, my essays could be revised to be improved. I should consider revising my essays more because there is always room for improvement. I should ask my peers to review my essay and to give me commentary on what I could work on in my …show more content…
I form an outline and organize my ideas into one space which helps me understand what my main points are and helps me understand how I could My weaknesses are poor time management, getting distracted, and procrastination till the last minute to finish my essays. I do not revise my essays very much besides taking into consideration my peer’s comments. I need to give myself more time to work on my second draft and the revision of that second draft; I usually stay up late writing this essay and I would like to space out my work over a period of time instead of cramming it two days before the essay is due. I usually get distracted when typing an essay because I go through different social media websites and browse through them until I realize that I have to finish my essay; I usually watch videos on YouTube or message my friends on Facebook; I should limit myself from distractions by putting away my phone or even having a post-it note reminder to not stray away from my essay because I will regret it when I am still working on my essay at 2:00 in the morning. For more peer editing and reviewing, I could go to the Writing Center on campus and meet with one of the volunteers there for more advice on how to develop my essay more. I believe that I write more when I am interested in the topic of the assignment; People tend to write more when