As I attended the class I also found out a few more challenges I need to take care of. One of these was my word choice was considerably low. Also, I tended to run more than one idea together in a single part of a paragraph. Then, I also had trouble with sources and never seemed to understand what should be italicized or in parentheses. And the tone of my papers seemed to go different ways, making it confusing if it was a formal paper or informal. In other word I would change my tone by talking in first person and then in third. But this class showed me how to improve by giving me tips and examples of writing. I improved in many areas. I learned what a thesis statement is and how to write it. Also, how to go back and change it when you finish your paper if
As I attended the class I also found out a few more challenges I need to take care of. One of these was my word choice was considerably low. Also, I tended to run more than one idea together in a single part of a paragraph. Then, I also had trouble with sources and never seemed to understand what should be italicized or in parentheses. And the tone of my papers seemed to go different ways, making it confusing if it was a formal paper or informal. In other word I would change my tone by talking in first person and then in third. But this class showed me how to improve by giving me tips and examples of writing. I improved in many areas. I learned what a thesis statement is and how to write it. Also, how to go back and change it when you finish your paper if