Jamie – 582 WORDS
Composition has changed my thinking in more ways than one. Writing is no longer a burden, but an opportunity to expand my thinking. Although I am not great at writing and I have more to learn, I now enjoy exploring ideas and putting pen to paper. I have been challenged almost to the brink of insanity and pushed to the edge but I have grown not only in my studies, but as a writer. My writing process in the beginning of this course was total chaos. My stomach turned cartwheels when I thought about writing. I had no idea what I was doing, let alone how to start an essay. My mind was so bogged down with the thought of failing that I was almost on the verge of a panic attack on many occasions. I was not sure if I was …show more content…
Not only have I learned how to carry out a conversation through discussions, I have also learned how to compose an essay. When I began this class I was sure I knew how to write a paper and make it sound like I knew what I was talking about. Upon completion of my first essay I discovered just how wrong I was. While there were a minimal amount of errors, the errors present made my essay sound as if it had been written by a child. After making the suggested corrections, I saw just how much my essay improved. I went from sounding like a person just spouting random thoughts, to coming off as an individual who might actually understand what has been stated. I carried the lesson learned from the first essay with me through the next two essays. I did see some improvement in my writing style with the Summary Analysis, however, I found myself backsliding with the Critical Essay. I see that there are still some areas that I need to work on. I am currently having some difficulty in sounding professional. I also have a difficult time not using second person wording, and I would like to improve upon my vocabulary. I have made improvement in my thought process. I am not jumping around as much as I have done
Composition has changed my thinking in more ways than one. Writing is no longer a burden, but an opportunity to expand my thinking. Although I am not great at writing and I have more to learn, I now enjoy exploring ideas and putting pen to paper. I have been challenged almost to the brink of insanity and pushed to the edge but I have grown not only in my studies, but as a writer. My writing process in the beginning of this course was total chaos. My stomach turned cartwheels when I thought about writing. I had no idea what I was doing, let alone how to start an essay. My mind was so bogged down with the thought of failing that I was almost on the verge of a panic attack on many occasions. I was not sure if I was …show more content…
Not only have I learned how to carry out a conversation through discussions, I have also learned how to compose an essay. When I began this class I was sure I knew how to write a paper and make it sound like I knew what I was talking about. Upon completion of my first essay I discovered just how wrong I was. While there were a minimal amount of errors, the errors present made my essay sound as if it had been written by a child. After making the suggested corrections, I saw just how much my essay improved. I went from sounding like a person just spouting random thoughts, to coming off as an individual who might actually understand what has been stated. I carried the lesson learned from the first essay with me through the next two essays. I did see some improvement in my writing style with the Summary Analysis, however, I found myself backsliding with the Critical Essay. I see that there are still some areas that I need to work on. I am currently having some difficulty in sounding professional. I also have a difficult time not using second person wording, and I would like to improve upon my vocabulary. I have made improvement in my thought process. I am not jumping around as much as I have done