My list was about the greatest video games. When writing the essay, I struggled with thinking of new sentence starters and I was not good at writing topic sentences. A lot of my sentences in the essay start with the, for, and in. I could have thought of a different way to word the sentences and then they would have started with different words for all or most of the sentences. Another thing that I struggled with in this essay is topic sentences, the second paragraph in my essay did not have one and if I had taken a few minutes to have thought of one I could have gotten a better grade on my essay. Something I wish I had done was read over my essay many times to catch mistakes that I had made. In my essay, I missed a mistake that I made and the sentence was confusing and if I had spent some more time revising it, I could have fixed it by changing the way I put the sentence together and added a few more commas. Somethings I have improved are topic sentences and better sentence
My list was about the greatest video games. When writing the essay, I struggled with thinking of new sentence starters and I was not good at writing topic sentences. A lot of my sentences in the essay start with the, for, and in. I could have thought of a different way to word the sentences and then they would have started with different words for all or most of the sentences. Another thing that I struggled with in this essay is topic sentences, the second paragraph in my essay did not have one and if I had taken a few minutes to have thought of one I could have gotten a better grade on my essay. Something I wish I had done was read over my essay many times to catch mistakes that I had made. In my essay, I missed a mistake that I made and the sentence was confusing and if I had spent some more time revising it, I could have fixed it by changing the way I put the sentence together and added a few more commas. Somethings I have improved are topic sentences and better sentence