I also had punctuation errors, putting periods inside of quotations, and capitalizing words that didn’t need to be capitalized. And, I realized that my descriptions were vague, so I started to divulge more details in the essays. I can fix this by either taking out unnecessary details, or by making them into multiple compound sentences. Also I have noticed that I had run on sentences. My essay did have some good qualities to it though. For example, I was able to realize what quotes best help support my claims. An example of this in the essay is when I was talking about Atticus being the main source of good, or light as Harper Lee would put it. When Atticus was at the jail house, Jem tells Scout “That’s funny’ said Jem, ‘Jail doesn’t have an outside light’” Another thing that I did well in this essay was that I had no spelling errors, which is one of my strongest traits when it comes to
I also had punctuation errors, putting periods inside of quotations, and capitalizing words that didn’t need to be capitalized. And, I realized that my descriptions were vague, so I started to divulge more details in the essays. I can fix this by either taking out unnecessary details, or by making them into multiple compound sentences. Also I have noticed that I had run on sentences. My essay did have some good qualities to it though. For example, I was able to realize what quotes best help support my claims. An example of this in the essay is when I was talking about Atticus being the main source of good, or light as Harper Lee would put it. When Atticus was at the jail house, Jem tells Scout “That’s funny’ said Jem, ‘Jail doesn’t have an outside light’” Another thing that I did well in this essay was that I had no spelling errors, which is one of my strongest traits when it comes to