Personal Narrative-Something New Our Mind

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There are thoughts that don’t leave our minds, when we start something new our mind stop to think in even more things. I’m living far from family for more than four years, in the middle of this time I also went to Japan and came to United Sates. Being far from my family make me think about past, what we did together and what I was feeling back there. I also can say that staying far made me more depressed, I started thinking about giving up of several things and start thinking about being alone. All the essays has the family element and “progress” in their focus because of my thoughts, because I continue far from my family and I’m tired of giving up of things since this is not my personality. We don’t stop to think about your family until …show more content…
In this vacation I found the importance of don’t give up and continues trying even if you fall down several times, I could see myself repeating the same movements again and again until get better. In the lyric journalism essay The theme is about role playing games, in this the story is divided in two parts, my brother, my friend and I playing and the characters history inside the game. The focus was in the story of characters and the difficult of creating a story with more people, how our plans don’t work and how we changed the ideas. To create the lyric essay the idea was to focus in the word kokoro, this is the word of heart but also for feeling and mind, with this I showed the progress of the heart to beating, going to feeling and finally be broken, showing inside of the essay the types of love we usually have in our …show more content…
Since I don’t have a fluent level of english I tried to see how much I could write without stop to think about grammar and then in final make revisions to see how I was writing. I don’t like to read, read is what make people write, to make these essays I need to read a lot of others texts and all in a language that is not my native one. All the reading made me fell more comfortable with the language and easier to develop the ideas. I changed the stile and structure in every essay I made. The first one was written in first voice, second one in third and first, and thefts one in second. About the structure I used a essay without pauses in the first, the second with digressions turning into two different essays if divide the story and digression and the third one I used poetic structure in column. With these essays I had the chance of develop not only my english level but to read more and knew new stiles of writing. I hope you enjoy the essays. Submerse into the words and reflect your own life to not have any regrets and just make your life move

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