Rhetorical Analysis Of ' Marijuana Legalization Defended By Scott Kolker
835 Words Dec 14th, 2015 4 Pages
The most relevant change that I made during this final revision was to recreate the thesis statement. I didn’t change it very much, however I made it much more clear and to the point. Over this year a tip that I have learned is that sometimes you have to change your thesis statement if your information doesn’t match what is in the paper, and that is why a lot of people recommend to write your thesis statement after you write the rest of the paper so that it strongly represents all the information you present. I used this idea to strengthen my thesis statement into something that really portrays the rest of the essay.
I went into a little more…