A major way I revised my paper was expanding on the principals of the Sanctity of Life and the 4th Amendment. In my first draft I only briefly mentioned the two, however, Janet advised that I should write more. She said that I needed to show two authority going against each other on both sides. Taking her advice I found more information on both topics to be able to give more in depth explanations. Janet suggested that I should move the position of one of my paragraphs in the section against euthanasia and physician assisted suicide. She said it make more sense and give a better flow. She also told me that I needed topic sentences on each of my paragraphs. This is so the reader can know what the paragraph is going to be about. Lastly, Janet
