In my second essay(final draft) you wrote, “This essay is very much like a 5 paragraph essay, you state a 3 part thesis then develop each part 1 paragraph at a time…not allowing room for your r.s. to develop.” Previously on my second draft you also wrote in the comments that my essay read like a five paragraph essay, but it was not until your final comment that I came to understand that my arguments were not well developed, because I have always tried to follow that structure leaving my argument out of the essays and not giving the readers reasons why they should believe anything I
In my second essay(final draft) you wrote, “This essay is very much like a 5 paragraph essay, you state a 3 part thesis then develop each part 1 paragraph at a time…not allowing room for your r.s. to develop.” Previously on my second draft you also wrote in the comments that my essay read like a five paragraph essay, but it was not until your final comment that I came to understand that my arguments were not well developed, because I have always tried to follow that structure leaving my argument out of the essays and not giving the readers reasons why they should believe anything I