The desire to fit in, to be understood by adults, the friendships that are made, the desire to rebel,… In addition the visual elements, tone and character personality traits, are major players in the audience’s capability to relate to the film… both movies are considered classics in the quintessential 1980’s teenage movie genre, The Breakfast Club has a more realistic tone to it, and shows a relatable depiction of the experiences of teenagers in high school.” Once ii began taking a deeper look into the movie in addition to reproach idea began to click and i was able to write a well written argument as to why The breakfast Club was more relatable move. Our next assgiment was tow rite a profile on someone we admire it could be some we know or someone famous. I chosse to write about NPR host Terry …show more content…
I ended p turing in in pretty late dn as a result i lost several points . This goes back to my problem, I need to focus and just write my paper instead of avoiding it. What really real me is once I forced my del to sit down and wtrie it i found it much sailer to write then i thought. I onsoitly find myself holding me myself baclw oth my writing. When i got he paper balck the score was low which i expected but i felt that if i had turned in in on time i actually would have done quite while. On tehfeedback from MS ferril she mentioned this was one of my better essay. So I take the low grade as a learign experience and hopefully I’ll learn to let go of my fears and just write.
As fro the the peer review for all the assugmenst overall it went very well and with the help of the peer review I was able to revise my paper. After turning the paper into our professor, she returned the essay with annotations of her own. I found this very helpful because of the quantity of annotations she left. This ultimately helped me rewrite my paper with ease.
My midterm profile consists of the steps I took writing the paper in addition to notes I took in class and from the reading