When reading the rhetorical sample essay, I do consider this a successful rhetorical analysis because the author of the essay Rebecca winter was able to break down the article, looking for rhetorical analysis and was able to see a flaw in in the article and show her evidence towards it. Yes I found the organization of this essay very effective because she use each paragraph to show her evidence, her facts, personal experience, as well as ethos, logos and pathos. I wouldn’t have organized it any differently she each paragraph was organized in a well much welled manner. This article could be presented in a different manner but I don’t think it would achieve the same result as the way it is written now, because if she was to put her ethos logos
