During the construction of my compare/contrast essay I had multiple writing …show more content…
A repeating issue throughout my papers is the focus and topic but the most helpful writing process came from my cause/effect essay. The topic was fairly simple for my research paper because I based it off of my cause/effect essay but I had to refocus the paper to make it more researchable. I went from “Long term foster care has many adverse effects on child development such as residual trauma, instability, emotional detachment, and weak self-sufficiency” to “Children who enter long term foster care develop a distorted sense of self-sufficiency as a result of ongoing trauma, placement instability, and aging out”. I kept the same topic of long term foster care, focused it on self-sufficiency, reworded my supporting points to ongoing trauma and placement stability, and added aging out to my supportive points. Referring back to my completed cause/effect essay not only assisted in the process of creating a topic but also in the research process. Throughout my cause/effect essay I highlighted claims that I had made d turned them into researchable questions. For example, one claim was “ children who experience trauma are more susceptible to developing PTSD”. From this claim I created the research question “What is the probability of a child developing PTSD who has been exposed to trauma”. Through this question I was able to find the supportive evidence I needed to prove my claim, “Children who have histories of abuse and neglect are at significantly higher risk of developing posttraumatic stress