If I have fully understand about the topic, it is still hard for me to write about it. My problem while rereading through my essay the first time is always the hardest, it does not make any sense and grammar errors all of the place that frustrates me. In the Donald M, Murray article, that “A piece of writing is never finish.” is a great way that no essay is perfect and can be improved in some way. As in my essays that I get all sorts of feedback from others and how their point of view seeing things differently and point out stuff. I have learn ways to point things out differently without having to give them to people to give me feedback, that takes some time but can improve the drafts. As walking away from the essay for a few hours or a day helps settled my mind and think of better ways to write sentences or even paragraph ideas. That has made my papers better in college than high school because I never did any of that before
If I have fully understand about the topic, it is still hard for me to write about it. My problem while rereading through my essay the first time is always the hardest, it does not make any sense and grammar errors all of the place that frustrates me. In the Donald M, Murray article, that “A piece of writing is never finish.” is a great way that no essay is perfect and can be improved in some way. As in my essays that I get all sorts of feedback from others and how their point of view seeing things differently and point out stuff. I have learn ways to point things out differently without having to give them to people to give me feedback, that takes some time but can improve the drafts. As walking away from the essay for a few hours or a day helps settled my mind and think of better ways to write sentences or even paragraph ideas. That has made my papers better in college than high school because I never did any of that before