This course WRIT 1500 was the best choice I could have made as a freshman. My first semester I took WRIT1100 and this semester I took 1500 and each one have taught me how to improve my writing and to try and find who I am as a writer. Mr. Murray has helped me improve my writing on analysis, developing, and proofreading. So far every essay these are the topics that I typically see comments on and he is always giving me advice on how to fix it and make it a enhanced essay overall. As a person I don’t typically proofread and that might be a strong downfall because I tend to loose a lot of points over it. For example my first essay I saw a comment that asked me if I proofread. He has helped me realize that sometime I tend to be quick and not give
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In class I have learned many things from improving my writing, to thinking outside the box to finding new writing styles from other people that I can add to my own. I think this is very critical because if you cant find the type of style you like to write then it will be hard to really compose an essay that is good because there wont be any of you in it and it will show if you weren’t entranced in composing it. I have also learned that there is always a way to convalesce your reading even if you read it over and over you can always add something. I think along with my proofreading I think something else that could get better is clear organization sometimes I tend to skip around and add other things that are related but not related to the thesis that I come up with. For example my last essay I came up with a thesis about how racism can lead a person to be limited in the things they can do and in return can make that person miserable. I had to pick a topic that went along with this thesis, which I chose work discrimination, I had articles and a book to show how work discrimination is still current and how it is effecting society badly. In the end I had to tie this with my thesis and I found this very hard to do but it
In class I have learned many things from improving my writing, to thinking outside the box to finding new writing styles from other people that I can add to my own. I think this is very critical because if you cant find the type of style you like to write then it will be hard to really compose an essay that is good because there wont be any of you in it and it will show if you weren’t entranced in composing it. I have also learned that there is always a way to convalesce your reading even if you read it over and over you can always add something. I think along with my proofreading I think something else that could get better is clear organization sometimes I tend to skip around and add other things that are related but not related to the thesis that I come up with. For example my last essay I came up with a thesis about how racism can lead a person to be limited in the things they can do and in return can make that person miserable. I had to pick a topic that went along with this thesis, which I chose work discrimination, I had articles and a book to show how work discrimination is still current and how it is effecting society badly. In the end I had to tie this with my thesis and I found this very hard to do but it