Personal Narrative Analysis

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In high school college was a big deal to many of my class mate some were scared of not getting into the right college of their choice so , they studying hard and received a great score on their SATs. When I thought about it these college want us to take a test to see if were good enough to be in there college. which I will have to pay them 25 to 40 hundred thousand a year. It didn't really make sense to me what so ever. Then again I wasn't really prepared to go to college honestly I thought high school was it for me. I had a choice to joined the working force to become a cop, firefighter, sanitation or join the military. My older Chris went to Buffalo college in upstate New York right on the border of Canada. He was the person …show more content…
In my head I was thinking how can I survive a 7 hour drive there so much music you can play until your favorite song become torture to your ears. The first 2 hours wasn't that bad it was quite nice see all of New York landscapes. I never knew New York had mountains it felt like I was in a different country. Also there were animal I saw a bear for the first time it was cross the road it I was scary and exciting. My older brother just smiled and laughed at all my reactions to seeing the different sceneries. Chris told me there more to New York then New York city it a big State you know while laughing. I responded I know that but never knew it was there amazing. The only place we went as a kid was Florida , Toronto, Canadian to visit our aunt Claudia and Dominican Republic to see our grandparents. As we were driving into the college parking lot it was huge It felt like a small town. I was more happy we made it to the college in one piece and I can finally stretch my legs and move again. Chris first show me the dorms and the campus there was a lot of walking involved. Students on bike, skateboard and running to trying to make it to class on time was funny. What really …show more content…
Which I was terrified of having In my head thought were running around "what if I get caught and have to spend time a jail for having a fake id just be cool and play it off". It was a night I would remember we were all having a good time then my brother took me outside to smoke then he told me that he was gay which to me was a surprise he had girlfriends in high school, smart and good looking I didn't know what to say then I just asked when did you know. When he graduated high school he had fling with a guy he met at school. I just hugged him and ask are you still the same person I grew up with that has the same values he replied yes then it doesn't matter who you love as long as you know the values you keep. When we came back in to the bar he had his arm around me with a smile on his face. Then some guy said why don't you two fags get a room. That made me cringe the fact he has to go through with people persecution him. Chris said let it go but I couldn't I step to the guy. I ask him to apologize he refuse he push me then I punch him nice clean shot to the cheek bone. Someone sucker punch me from behind it was the worst

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