Descriptive Essay - Original Writing
“Hello” I said in a raspy voice.
“Eww, you have stankin breath!” Johan joked.
I laughed and responded with “Shut up!”
“Julian, you want to hang out today?” Johan asks.
“Sure, what you want to do?” I inquired. I could tell he didn’t have any plans so I went ahead and suggested, “Let’s go to the movies!”
“That sounds cool; tell mom I’ll be there in an hour, to get dressed.” He ordered.
I got up to pick out something to wear. My mom had been up all morning washing our laundry. My closet smelled like dryer sheets and detergent. I loved having fresh clean clothes to put on so I immediately took out one of my favorite shirts and a pair of Levi jeans. I then proceeded to shower.
My mom invited one of her girlfriends over for tea. They were sitting in the room watching a rerun of some talk show that they had missed over the week. I enjoyed hearing my mom laugh. She could make anything sound like it was really funny, no matter how lame I thought it was. I yelled to her, “Ma, I’m getting in the shower! Johan is coming to pick me up!” She calls back, “Okay son!”
About 10 minutes into the shower, I heard someone beat on the door. “Hurry up!!!” the voice shouted.
“Leave me alone” I screamed. I kept…