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Outside my house in 20 mile up Vaughn road in the year of 2015 during the summer my brother Bobby, and I had a airsoft gun war! I used a black airsoft pistol, and Bobby used a airsoft pump shotgun. "Tell us when to go", we stated. "Ok", mom replied."Ready Go", mom said. We ran as fast as the wind. I ran so fast I thought my heart was going to come out of my chest! I would hide behind lawn mowers that smelled reekingly felt lumpy, and it was metal. We would run behind trees that smelled aromatic, and my dad's garage that smelled musty, felt smooth and the color of it was green. Bobby shot me in the leg while I was running and I fell down. While I was on the ground I shot at him and missed but it sounded kind of muffled. Bobby wins the airsoft

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