Reflective Essay When Shoba's Indifference?

I am an English major, and I absolutely, positively, hate writing essays. It has often been suggested to me that since I have such a strong opposition to the task, perhaps I should elect to change majors, and while those people do make a good point, the idea of carefully presenting my ideas in a concise, organized manner has yet to seem revolting enough to make me back down. See, trudging through unpleasant situations is my only talent, a talent that was necessary to have when I was a candidate for the International Baccalaureate Diploma. That is not to say that International Baccalaureate English classes were miserable. In fact, I thoroughly enjoyed dedicating a year of my life to poetry, but it was miserable to have every single essay marked down because of convolution. That convolution could easily be blamed on fiction. For a long time, I believed that writing an analytical essay should be akin to writing a short story, so the …show more content…
First sentence: When Shoba’s indifference returns, it is not quite indifference.
Last sentence: The sense of indifference that accompanies electric light persists, carrying over from previous scenes featuring it, along with …show more content…
For example, in drafts of my first revised essay, a criticism of Lucy Campbell’s film The Pig Child, some paragraphs included multiple fully and partially developed points along with about a dozen pieces of evidence. This kind of chaos was caused by my egocentrism because I did not put extra, or any, effort into organization because I assumed that if a delivery method worked for me, it would work just as easily for anyone