Hello Zarrin! It was a pleasure to review your reader response, which was quite unique and expressive. Overall, I certainly agree with your analysis of the story, in how we as humans can allow ourselves to be mentally limited and restricted. However, I do not think this belief ties in with the novel entirely, being that even though the destiny and future of the clones were already determined, they still enjoyed some of the freedoms we enjoy today, such as traveling wherever we please or dating whomever we wish. Pertaining to areas of improvement needed, I would suggest restructuring your thesis statement so it is more clear and focused. I would also suggest, placing the thesis statement at the beginning of the first paragraph, so your reader
