It is hard for the reader to infer what is being told to them especially when proof is not given, which lessens the impact of the piece. By delving deeper into the main concepts of revolution and smart phones, it is clear that revolution is ambiguous while smart phones are clearly defined, and the author did not trail off from his main argument. Overall, the article gave a brief understanding on the challenged RIM faces and how they must revolutionize the way they do business to stay relevant and take back their position as leader of the smartphone market however, more information provided would of strengthened his argument and show the reader the importance of RIM to the cellphone market. Too much was left to infer, and without background knowledge on the company the average reader may have difficulty understanding the importance of this article. Is RIM going under really a bad thing? In the business world old business are replaced by new innovations all the time. Now it’s RIMs turn to face the fate of companies they’ve reduced to nothing. What importance does RIM staying afloat bring to society? Should they just call it
It is hard for the reader to infer what is being told to them especially when proof is not given, which lessens the impact of the piece. By delving deeper into the main concepts of revolution and smart phones, it is clear that revolution is ambiguous while smart phones are clearly defined, and the author did not trail off from his main argument. Overall, the article gave a brief understanding on the challenged RIM faces and how they must revolutionize the way they do business to stay relevant and take back their position as leader of the smartphone market however, more information provided would of strengthened his argument and show the reader the importance of RIM to the cellphone market. Too much was left to infer, and without background knowledge on the company the average reader may have difficulty understanding the importance of this article. Is RIM going under really a bad thing? In the business world old business are replaced by new innovations all the time. Now it’s RIMs turn to face the fate of companies they’ve reduced to nothing. What importance does RIM staying afloat bring to society? Should they just call it