Thesis 1: “Ancient Egyptian architecture has many unique qualities.”
While the thesis is straight to the point, it doesn’t sond like it is so much a map to guide the audience on what to expect to come out of the speech.
Thesis 2: “The ancient hieroglyphic writings on the walls, the decayed man-made monuments, and the numerous tombs, all represent an era of great civilization that is long gone, but has left invaluable art for us to admire.”
I think that this will be more effective in the fact that it is more likely to draw undivided attention of the audience as many might have heard about the civilization, but they might not know what it left behind.
About 80% of college students use or abuse alcohol, only because alcohol is the most
While the thesis is straight to the point, it doesn’t sond like it is so much a map to guide the audience on what to expect to come out of the speech.
Thesis 2: “The ancient hieroglyphic writings on the walls, the decayed man-made monuments, and the numerous tombs, all represent an era of great civilization that is long gone, but has left invaluable art for us to admire.”
I think that this will be more effective in the fact that it is more likely to draw undivided attention of the audience as many might have heard about the civilization, but they might not know what it left behind.
About 80% of college students use or abuse alcohol, only because alcohol is the most