Wow! The two kids in the narrative essay “The Great Buffalo Hunt” were little rebels, hesitant about going into the first grade, ran away to become “Mountain Men” ,that were depicted in their children’s book, that do not shower or bathe, and of course no school. It kind of amazes me that they both were gone for four days and went over twenty miles. It is also funny, however, they both packed “duffle bags the size of adolescent whales” The writing of this paper is great and it really grabbed my attention, wondering what would happen next. The conclusion of this paper was also very interesting, as he put it they both were sentenced as fugitives. Overall, it was a well-written
