For one thing, it starts out with a wild claim that it is unscripted. This is believable for a moment, until they bring the first “participant” from behind the curtain. The problem is that the “participant” lines are in the same basic style as the other lines. They are stilted and formal, obviously preformative. Now it is really difficult to write a line that sound unscripted and random, but I feel that the play depended on the writers having that ability. As they obviously don’t, the premise and creepiness are negated. It stops being as much of an interaction and just keeps being the audience watching a performance. That being said, I did think that the dementophobia part was written really well. Dementophobia is the fear of going insane. During this section, the actors stand in the audience and say different lines, while a pleasant voice repeats in the background that dementophobia is the fear of going insane, of losing ones grip on reality. The culmination of this is a lot of movement, and a really chilling scream from the “participant.” That part was pretty cool, the rest had its moments, but was negated by the stilted lines that were littered
For one thing, it starts out with a wild claim that it is unscripted. This is believable for a moment, until they bring the first “participant” from behind the curtain. The problem is that the “participant” lines are in the same basic style as the other lines. They are stilted and formal, obviously preformative. Now it is really difficult to write a line that sound unscripted and random, but I feel that the play depended on the writers having that ability. As they obviously don’t, the premise and creepiness are negated. It stops being as much of an interaction and just keeps being the audience watching a performance. That being said, I did think that the dementophobia part was written really well. Dementophobia is the fear of going insane. During this section, the actors stand in the audience and say different lines, while a pleasant voice repeats in the background that dementophobia is the fear of going insane, of losing ones grip on reality. The culmination of this is a lot of movement, and a really chilling scream from the “participant.” That part was pretty cool, the rest had its moments, but was negated by the stilted lines that were littered