2. Who were the two students (names required) you responded to for the blog comments assignments? Reflect on your imagining, thinking, and writing processes used to complete your comments to Blog Entry 1 and Blog Entry …show more content…
People just went by the blind guy dropping a little money at first. They didn’t read his sign. A lady comes by and changes the wording of the sign. She has changed the sign from it, saying that I am blind, please help to it’s a beautiful day out and I can’t see it. She had changed the way the people were giving him their change. When the lady was writing on the sign the blind man felt her shoes. The lady leaves and returns, he feels her shoes again to make sure it’s the same lady. Then he asked her what she has done to his sign. The lady told him she wrote the same thing, but word it differently. She had changed up the sign to say “What a beautiful day out and I can’t see it”. I found that by up changing the words on the blind man’s sign that the lady helped him make more change from the people that was passing by. I felt this was a very good visual story. I think that this might really help me in this course. I find that I am a boring writer, so if I could use this to help improve my writing skills then I will be a better