Hurricane Rita was heading straight for Houston. Cronin and his wife packed up their kids and left. After six hours and fifty miles, they reached a scene that resembled an apocalypse: stores were picked clean of their goods, trash was everywhere, and families were sleeping not far from the road. Then, Cronin remembered that many of these people had guns, and he had children and a couple of thousand dollars with nothing to protect himself from the possibility of a dangerous person looking to steal. After his wife wouldn’t let him leave the car, Justin decided to turn around and head straight where the hurricane was predicted to hit. With luck, Hurricane Rita turned away from Houston. If it hadn’t, Cronin believed the modern, technological services many depended on for basic needs would fail and cause people to become desperate …show more content…
His delayed thesis statement causes gun advocates and anti-gun activists to read throughout most of article before they hear his opinion. If his thesis statement was in the beginning, it would cause these people to either stop reading or shut down their open mind. The article is informal because it uses very little statistics or facts. The author uses events from his life and hypotheticals that could of happened to him. The article still has a serious tone, which it needs when talking about a topic that most people have a strong opinion on. It also needs this tone because of the events that are related to it