Since the 70s, the way we move has changed a lot. The fuels that we used have changed because of technology. The speed that we can get to places now has increased rapidly, but has that made it better. There has been a lot of safety regulations implemented since the 70s. For example, seat belts and speed limits on roads helped keep the roads and pedestrians safe, but even with safety regulations; giving some people this technology is very dangerous so they will use it to their advantage.
If you lived 20 years ago and you went to a place that you didn't know around, you'd be lost with nothing to help you and no one to help you. You took one wrong turn and then you're lost forever, but now, you have a smartphone or Wi-Fi that can pinpoint to your exact location, so you can never get lost.
There are now many different types of transportation that you can use to get around, like the …show more content…
As such, the improvement of technology, transportation, communication and infrastructure have added a lot bringing betterment to the life of people. However, advances in technology have caused a problem like global warming. Which argument are you making? Your initial statement says that technology has caused a problem but your thesis says that life is easier now? This is contradictory. So you could write: Therefore, I personally believe that life would have been easier 100 years ago than now. Or Change the sentence before your thesis to something that supports your thesis statement.
With the advancement of technology many problems have happened, many new problems have come to the scene, but the most popular is global warming. For this reason, modern technology has proven damaging to the whole environment. For instance, nuclear power has drawbacks that will not reduce carbon emissions. As a matter of fact, this reduces the amount of oxygen and would make people's life unhealthy. It is evident that technology would pose a dangerous problem for
If you lived 20 years ago and you went to a place that you didn't know around, you'd be lost with nothing to help you and no one to help you. You took one wrong turn and then you're lost forever, but now, you have a smartphone or Wi-Fi that can pinpoint to your exact location, so you can never get lost.
There are now many different types of transportation that you can use to get around, like the …show more content…
As such, the improvement of technology, transportation, communication and infrastructure have added a lot bringing betterment to the life of people. However, advances in technology have caused a problem like global warming. Which argument are you making? Your initial statement says that technology has caused a problem but your thesis says that life is easier now? This is contradictory. So you could write: Therefore, I personally believe that life would have been easier 100 years ago than now. Or Change the sentence before your thesis to something that supports your thesis statement.
With the advancement of technology many problems have happened, many new problems have come to the scene, but the most popular is global warming. For this reason, modern technology has proven damaging to the whole environment. For instance, nuclear power has drawbacks that will not reduce carbon emissions. As a matter of fact, this reduces the amount of oxygen and would make people's life unhealthy. It is evident that technology would pose a dangerous problem for