A. Attention Getter: Most of us are considered as a legal adult, we can vote, smoke, get married, join the military – which includes risking one’s life.
B. Relevancy: We can also drink; or should I say, you guys can drink. In my case, to legally drink at USA I need to be 21 years old.
C. Credibility: I admit to have drunk alcoholics drinks before. But do not judge me that fast, I did not break any laws. How? Well, the first time I drink was in my country China which does not have a drinking age restriction.
D. Thesis: Drinking Age restriction should be lowered on the USA
E. Preview: Today I will try to persuade you about the drinking age restriction, more specific, I will be talking about: the drinking age should be lowered, the benefits of …show more content…
BODY
A. Need: The MLDA 21 is making young adults break the law.
1. Subpoint: Majority of teens continue to consume alcohol. (Evidence: According to the Columbia University, “a minimum of $22.5 billion (17.5 percent) of consumer expenditures for alcohol came from underage drinking”.)
2. Subpoint: The MLDA 21 promotes Vandalism. (Evidence: According to Marl Kleiman, a professor that teaches at NYU and had its education at Harvard university says that, MLDA 21 encourages young adults to acquire and use false identification documents to procure alcohol. In this era of national security concerns, including terrorism, illegal immigration, and other threats, it would be better to have fewer fake IDs in circulation and more respect for the law..)
Transition: It is clear that MLDA 21 is harming the society. Next, let’s discuss what can be done about it.
B. Satifaction: The government needs to lower the drinking age to …show more content…
Subpoint: You can scatter or bury the ashes them. (Evidence: Scattering is particularly popular, returning them to the earth, often according to the deceased last wishes, on mountains, in the woods, in the garden, etc. Also, Ashes are also buried in cemeteries, stored behind plaques at crematoria, and portioned up and left in different places meaningful to the deceased or the family.
2. Subpoint: There are more alternatives. (Evidence: You can turns your ashes as jewelry, such as pendants, rings, necklaces, lockets. Also, you can turn it into a diamond or have them made into fireworks.)
Transition: Certainly, MLDA 16 would benefit our society. So what have we discussed today?
III. CONCLUSION
A. Summary: All things considered, there is a compelling case to lower the MLDA 21 to 16.
1. First, we have been talking about how terrible is MLDA 21, is making young adults break the law.
2. Next, we discussed a solution for this, lowering the MLDA 21 to 16 since it brings benefits.
3. Finally, how our legacy can be remembered by scattering, burying, turning them into accessories or fireworks.
B. Action Step: Let’s get together and make the things that we did illegally, legal.
C. Clincher: “Memories are the key not to the past, but to the future.” Corrie Ten
B. Relevancy: We can also drink; or should I say, you guys can drink. In my case, to legally drink at USA I need to be 21 years old.
C. Credibility: I admit to have drunk alcoholics drinks before. But do not judge me that fast, I did not break any laws. How? Well, the first time I drink was in my country China which does not have a drinking age restriction.
D. Thesis: Drinking Age restriction should be lowered on the USA
E. Preview: Today I will try to persuade you about the drinking age restriction, more specific, I will be talking about: the drinking age should be lowered, the benefits of …show more content…
BODY
A. Need: The MLDA 21 is making young adults break the law.
1. Subpoint: Majority of teens continue to consume alcohol. (Evidence: According to the Columbia University, “a minimum of $22.5 billion (17.5 percent) of consumer expenditures for alcohol came from underage drinking”.)
2. Subpoint: The MLDA 21 promotes Vandalism. (Evidence: According to Marl Kleiman, a professor that teaches at NYU and had its education at Harvard university says that, MLDA 21 encourages young adults to acquire and use false identification documents to procure alcohol. In this era of national security concerns, including terrorism, illegal immigration, and other threats, it would be better to have fewer fake IDs in circulation and more respect for the law..)
Transition: It is clear that MLDA 21 is harming the society. Next, let’s discuss what can be done about it.
B. Satifaction: The government needs to lower the drinking age to …show more content…
Subpoint: You can scatter or bury the ashes them. (Evidence: Scattering is particularly popular, returning them to the earth, often according to the deceased last wishes, on mountains, in the woods, in the garden, etc. Also, Ashes are also buried in cemeteries, stored behind plaques at crematoria, and portioned up and left in different places meaningful to the deceased or the family.
2. Subpoint: There are more alternatives. (Evidence: You can turns your ashes as jewelry, such as pendants, rings, necklaces, lockets. Also, you can turn it into a diamond or have them made into fireworks.)
Transition: Certainly, MLDA 16 would benefit our society. So what have we discussed today?
III. CONCLUSION
A. Summary: All things considered, there is a compelling case to lower the MLDA 21 to 16.
1. First, we have been talking about how terrible is MLDA 21, is making young adults break the law.
2. Next, we discussed a solution for this, lowering the MLDA 21 to 16 since it brings benefits.
3. Finally, how our legacy can be remembered by scattering, burying, turning them into accessories or fireworks.
B. Action Step: Let’s get together and make the things that we did illegally, legal.
C. Clincher: “Memories are the key not to the past, but to the future.” Corrie Ten