Zor Road Rite Of Passage

Josiah, I liked the way you structured your introduction to your meaningful place, by juxtaposing it against conventionally sought tourist attractions and by painting a quaint, picturesque image using the details along Reesor Road. As such, the Robert Frost allusion fittingly contributes to the tranquil atmosphere with which Reesor Road is portrayed.

A poignant point in your essay was when you mentioned that your family entrusting the Toyota for your utility resembles a rite of passage. How might this shift in faith as you enter emerging adulthood relate to parental expectations of your obligations as a young adult? How does their perspective of you as being able to carry the burden of responsibilities and personal autonomy of choice apply, especially as your parents experience a stressful period? Might the withdrawal of their close monitoring symbolize their conviction in your capacity to manage obstacles you face both in school and at home, as you seek your identity and direction in life? You could relate the passing of the car keys to your parents. …show more content…
You perceive your joyful encounter of your meaningful place amidst exhilarating exploration and travel as an “escape from stress at home and at school.” However, could the escape be characterized by the fulfillment of your desire for adventure and control, while Reesor Road instead becomes a venue for introspective thoughts to think about and face deeper issues? How could the lack of being tied down indicate your thoughts of being bewildered or hesitant when you “often tried to stay out of the house,” as you often were uncertain of what you could do to help? Maybe your meaningful place is more than just an escape, but instead provides an isolated haven for you to gather your frazzled thoughts or emotions, to reconcile with reality before gaining energy and strength to work toward your goals