Narrative Essay About My Deepest Secret

Everyone has a secret. Secrets are like cats, no matter how hard you try to keep them trapped they will eventually be set free. Most secrets do not have the power to destroy you, but mine does. I have a power, I have mind control. I was born with this power but I didn’t fully understand it until I was ten. It only works when I make complete eye contact with a person. Then I must say a command and they will do whatever I say. The only people that know about my deepest secret is my parents. They were the ones that told me to never tell anyone ever but they never told me why. I haven’t even told my best friend River. Even though I want to tell her you just can’t trust anyone these days. But I also would never use my powers on her, I’m …show more content…
“Yeah, sounds good.” I reply. River just recently got her driver 's license. I still have about four months till I can get mine so River drives me around everywhere. We pull out onto the main street and take a quick turn just as a car comes flying past us, we almost collide.
“River!” I yell at her.
“What?” She asks as if she has no idea.
“You know what. Now drive right.” River’s a terrible driver, I still don’t understand how she got her license. When we get to mall we were on our way to our favorite store to shop. When we turned the corner I heard shouting from one of the stores. “What’s going on in there?” River asks. “I don’t know. I’m going to go check it out.” I say. “I’m coming with you.” No. She can’t come with me. “No! I mean, please just stay here.” “Why can’t I come with you?” She …show more content…
He is holding a gun to his head. “I 'll shoot you if you don’t give me all your money!” He screams at the cashier. “Give me the money!” I have to do something.
I slowly walk up to the composition and stand right next to the man with the gun. This is so dangerous. He turns to look at me keeping the gun on the man. “You think you save this man, little girl?” He asks me as he stares into my eyes. I don’t reply. “You’re not going to answer me? Do you want me to shoot you? I’m not afraid to shoot little girls like you!” My heart is pounding so hard.
“Give me the gun,” I demand. His complete demeanor changes and he immediately hands me the gun. “Now walk out of this store and never come back.” I turn to watch him walk out the door only to find River standing right in front of me. Behind her is a group of policemen. Dang it! She never listens to me! The policemen grab the robber and handcuff him behind his back. I hand the policeman the gun without taking my eyes off of River and they leave with the criminal.
We quickly walk out of the store. The cashier calls out to me “Thank you ma 'am.” I turn to back to look at him, “No problem!” I shout