The main purpose of the paper is to discover how the errors of capturing the charges in the ED occurred and how this error of revenue charges could be fixed. Once the outline is placed in draft form and the main concerns are addressed the structure of the paper seems fine.
2. How does the introduction catch the reader’s attention or generate interest in the topic? If it does not, how can this be accomplished?
The introduction is appropriate for any location for the hospital, all areas are effected by improper revenue charges or the lack of. If the introduction also included some praise for the hard work the team performs and this issues being brought to the light to capture the hard work of the ED staff, would make the staff more enthusiastic for improvement.
3. What organization format is used for the body paragraphs? Is it consistently used for all the information? Are any variations justified?
The outline has an APA format, and once developed into a draft, and then a final product, the APA format will be formed. It is consistent APA outline format, except running head on any page except the first page, the rest should only be the shortened capitalized title. Also the title after running head first page needs to be capitalized.
4. Is each main point clearly explained? What type of support is used?