While this is an extremely important topic, it takes away from the argument by putting more focus on where to go if you support same sex marriage. If an audience that doesn’t support same sex marriage was asked to read the article, they may find more information on where to go to support couples, rather than why it is so important to support same sex marriage. For example, toward the end of the article there is a section devoted to how someone can help a same sex family. This is extremely important, but it definitely takes away from where there could have been a very strong ending argument that really leaves the reader thinking about what their views
While this is an extremely important topic, it takes away from the argument by putting more focus on where to go if you support same sex marriage. If an audience that doesn’t support same sex marriage was asked to read the article, they may find more information on where to go to support couples, rather than why it is so important to support same sex marriage. For example, toward the end of the article there is a section devoted to how someone can help a same sex family. This is extremely important, but it definitely takes away from where there could have been a very strong ending argument that really leaves the reader thinking about what their views