Rhetorical Analysis Of Kamara's Writing

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As many people may know becoming a good writer does not happen overnight it is something that take years to accomplish, but will still be something to improve upon. After evaluating Kamara’s writing over the course of the semester one could see the strengths and the weaknesses that she has. From the past writing was never her favorite subject it was actually her worst but after entering her class she began to enjoy it and better herself. Though she has become better at it her writing will become even better since she is able to acknowledge the weaknesses let alone her strengths.
Since the very beginning starting with the rhetorical analysis throughout the end to her research paper one of her strengths is the planning process before the writing

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