Although I like where you are going with your essay, I do not think you have addressed the major opposing viewpoint that came to my mind. As a first time reader of your plan, I noticed that although you claim that reading fiction will help with anxiety and depression, you have not …show more content…
"You've Got Me Under Your Skin" by Liam Duncan supports your argument that "reading fiction novels or short stories can be an effective treatment for depression" by highlighting the change in mood and empathy that can be experienced through reading fiction (Darren Smith). "Social Media Empower People" by Simon Mainwaring falls short for me. It does not feel connected to your argument, and seems to go a little off topic into the pros and cons of social media, and does not add to the discussion about mental health. I do not know how to strengthen the connection with this source, and would advise you to consider looking for a stronger counter