I need to work on really pronouncing my words and taking my time with each sentence. If I would have done this, my poem would have been at least a minute long. Another challenge I faced was writing the poem to where my ideas correlated. When writing a poem, so many ideas and thoughts come to my head that it is hard to put them all onto one piece of paper. This poem was a tiny bit jumbled in my opinion, but it made sense to me and most of the people I read it aloud to. If I read this poem with a partner, I feel like I would have done even worse because I would have someone to lean on, which doesn’t always make me feel better. Honestly, it felt awkward to perform my poem live. I know other people in the room felt like that too. I believe poems are just such a private sense of emotion. Even though our project was to read them to the class and we knew that, the class still wrote poems that were personal to them, whether it be racism, anxiety, or slavery. Kudos to the people who read their poems out loud voluntarily for fun, I have no idea how they do
I need to work on really pronouncing my words and taking my time with each sentence. If I would have done this, my poem would have been at least a minute long. Another challenge I faced was writing the poem to where my ideas correlated. When writing a poem, so many ideas and thoughts come to my head that it is hard to put them all onto one piece of paper. This poem was a tiny bit jumbled in my opinion, but it made sense to me and most of the people I read it aloud to. If I read this poem with a partner, I feel like I would have done even worse because I would have someone to lean on, which doesn’t always make me feel better. Honestly, it felt awkward to perform my poem live. I know other people in the room felt like that too. I believe poems are just such a private sense of emotion. Even though our project was to read them to the class and we knew that, the class still wrote poems that were personal to them, whether it be racism, anxiety, or slavery. Kudos to the people who read their poems out loud voluntarily for fun, I have no idea how they do