Elements of this error can be seen in Rex Murphy’s “What We Are Fighting For”. In this otherwise excellent essay, Mr. Murphy provides an organized and highly logical presentation for Canada’s continued military intervention in Afghanistan while ignoring the great emotional impact a subject like war can have. At its most extreme, this overemphasis on facts over an emotional connection results in a brief set of “ABC” style bullet points at one location (Murphy, 438 – 439). It should be noted Mr. Murphy does make a brief emotional appeal, he concludes by reflecting on the “very mixed effort” of Parliament, but it’s tacked on to the very end of an otherwise cold piece of writing (Murphy, 439). While this essay isn’t quite the “writing for bibliographies” Booth describes (Booth, 141), it does seem to lack any sort of emotional connection with the
Elements of this error can be seen in Rex Murphy’s “What We Are Fighting For”. In this otherwise excellent essay, Mr. Murphy provides an organized and highly logical presentation for Canada’s continued military intervention in Afghanistan while ignoring the great emotional impact a subject like war can have. At its most extreme, this overemphasis on facts over an emotional connection results in a brief set of “ABC” style bullet points at one location (Murphy, 438 – 439). It should be noted Mr. Murphy does make a brief emotional appeal, he concludes by reflecting on the “very mixed effort” of Parliament, but it’s tacked on to the very end of an otherwise cold piece of writing (Murphy, 439). While this essay isn’t quite the “writing for bibliographies” Booth describes (Booth, 141), it does seem to lack any sort of emotional connection with the