ATTENTION GETTER: About how often did you see rain?
STATE THESIS & MAIN POINTS: The causes of the drought in California led to serious effect nowadays; having the expensive costs of water brings people to the shortage of water.
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I. MAIN POINT: In the first paragraph, I will be talking about a bit of the background information about drought and water.
A. SUBPOINT: Firstly, I will explain what is drought?
1. Drought is defined as a period of dry weather; for example, warm temperature or no rain.
a. There are many places in the world that have drought, and California is one of the states in America that is entering the fourth year of drought.
b. The geographic places that California located is the most effective position held that will bypass …show more content…
SUBPOINT: Next, I will be talking about brief information about the water.
1. Even though there is water around the west coast of California, but those water is unusable, because it is not fresh and polluted.
a. According to the research shown in National Geographic, over 70% of Earth surface is covered with water, but only 2.5% is fresh water.
2. Other than that, the pollution of the water greatly influences the limited amount of water.
a. For example, the industrial water, sewage waste, chemical waste and other water pollutions really reduce the amount of water that human can use.
C. SUBPOINT: After searching through the internet, I can see how serious the drought is; there are many websites encourage us to find solutions to conserve water. By that, there are many ways to conserve water.
1. For example, when you wanted to wash your clothes, try to make sure your laundry is full before you turn on your washing machine.
a. Other than that, before you wash your dishes with a dish washer, make sure it is also full of plates before you started it.
2. Additionally, take shower instead of bath, because when you use bath, you will take longer time and more water usage to fill up the bathtub, almost up to 100 liters of
STATE THESIS & MAIN POINTS: The causes of the drought in California led to serious effect nowadays; having the expensive costs of water brings people to the shortage of water.
Body
I. MAIN POINT: In the first paragraph, I will be talking about a bit of the background information about drought and water.
A. SUBPOINT: Firstly, I will explain what is drought?
1. Drought is defined as a period of dry weather; for example, warm temperature or no rain.
a. There are many places in the world that have drought, and California is one of the states in America that is entering the fourth year of drought.
b. The geographic places that California located is the most effective position held that will bypass …show more content…
SUBPOINT: Next, I will be talking about brief information about the water.
1. Even though there is water around the west coast of California, but those water is unusable, because it is not fresh and polluted.
a. According to the research shown in National Geographic, over 70% of Earth surface is covered with water, but only 2.5% is fresh water.
2. Other than that, the pollution of the water greatly influences the limited amount of water.
a. For example, the industrial water, sewage waste, chemical waste and other water pollutions really reduce the amount of water that human can use.
C. SUBPOINT: After searching through the internet, I can see how serious the drought is; there are many websites encourage us to find solutions to conserve water. By that, there are many ways to conserve water.
1. For example, when you wanted to wash your clothes, try to make sure your laundry is full before you turn on your washing machine.
a. Other than that, before you wash your dishes with a dish washer, make sure it is also full of plates before you started it.
2. Additionally, take shower instead of bath, because when you use bath, you will take longer time and more water usage to fill up the bathtub, almost up to 100 liters of