Evaluating An Argument Peer Review Essay
Instructions: Please answer each question in detail. I expect at least three to four sentences per question.
Does the author present the issue in his or her introduction? Suggestions?
I think their intro is pretty decent. It starts off qith a questions then goes on to answer them. Starting off with a catching question is a good start in my book.
Does he start from general information and move to specifics? Suggestions?
I believe so. They starts off with a broad " you shouldn 't eat meat" kinda topic but shows why a vegetable life style might be a profitable one. However, I would like to see some outside sources of the author. I would like to know a little more about Laurel Gladden and what their backgrounds are.
Does that author have a stated thesis with a clear map of points? Suggestions?
I wouldn 't say it is completely clear. It would be nice if each paragraph had it 's own key points. One paragragh is about tone, another about background, and so one.
Please provide specific feedback about the introductions format, information, and style. What is missing?
It 'll be better if again, it was more clear about what section you 're speaking about. It feels a bit scattered and doesn 't feel like it is in order. Your paragraph about his information is fine but I think it needs to be orangized.
Does the writer introduce the article’s name, the author’s name, and the main point/argument of the article? Is it effective?