During the writing of my “Fahrenheit 451” and Plato’s “Allegory of the Cave” Analysis, I began by first, thinking out my ideas, to put together an essay that would be understandable to myself, the people reviewing my essay, and lastly, my teacher. You are needing a thesis to get your point situated right in front of the readers’ eyes so he or she doesn’t get bewildered while reading. In almost any standardized essay however, your maximum length for a thesis is at most, needing to be one sentence. Even though, you're evidently going to need to write more to get the introduction that is impeccable, but simple.
When I wrote my thesis, my thought process consisted of a straight to the point generalization, that included my metaphor, and who the metaphor was going to be based on. Originally, my thesis was going to be based upon 3 different topics however, …show more content…
However, my father and my close peers were able to assist me in my process of writing my final draft and with their corrections, I was able to implement them into my paper which served as a massive aid when writing this analysis. When my peers and my father were helping me in my analysis, they noticed that throughout my rough draft, I was using too many words, I wasn’t exploring much bigger vocabulary, and my sentence structure and complex sentences needed more work and when I was looking over the essay, I could immediately see what they were talking about.
So, I started to work on exactly what they said. And soon enough, I was done with my analysis because, I had already done my thesis, my ideas were all laid out and put together perfectly, and it had all made sense in the end. Some ideas however, I couldn't implement into my essay because, most of time, it would of metaphorically unscrewed some of the bolts that kept my essay together. Overall, I believed it did help and I can’t thank them enough for their
When I wrote my thesis, my thought process consisted of a straight to the point generalization, that included my metaphor, and who the metaphor was going to be based on. Originally, my thesis was going to be based upon 3 different topics however, …show more content…
However, my father and my close peers were able to assist me in my process of writing my final draft and with their corrections, I was able to implement them into my paper which served as a massive aid when writing this analysis. When my peers and my father were helping me in my analysis, they noticed that throughout my rough draft, I was using too many words, I wasn’t exploring much bigger vocabulary, and my sentence structure and complex sentences needed more work and when I was looking over the essay, I could immediately see what they were talking about.
So, I started to work on exactly what they said. And soon enough, I was done with my analysis because, I had already done my thesis, my ideas were all laid out and put together perfectly, and it had all made sense in the end. Some ideas however, I couldn't implement into my essay because, most of time, it would of metaphorically unscrewed some of the bolts that kept my essay together. Overall, I believed it did help and I can’t thank them enough for their