Death Valley: A Short Story

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Death Valley
Jenny runs inside screaming “guys come outside you will never believe what I just found.” “What is it.” Gina yelled “Just follow me.” Jenny yelled impatiently
They all went outside and followed Jenny all the way to the woods.Then as they turn at one more corner they all scream in the amazing moment.They all three push and shove their ways inside the warm heated camper.We were just so excited and happy about the whole situation. “where did you get the tools.”Gina asked. “In the car.” Jenny yelled loudly. Well the girls looked in the fridge and found lots of food. As the girls ate a snack. Gina was very confident in helping her family get out of Death Valley.Gina walked around back and found a spicket (a hose end that lets water out so like a drinking fountain)she yelled to Jenny and Donna to come see the surprising finding. They were all so amazed and excited Jenny Gina and Donna were all thinking now we might actually have a chance surviving!Wow we can now live and not die out here all alone.thought Donna.I knew we wouldn't get saved so i'm happy this happened.Thought Jenny in her head.I knew we would get saved I have been confident this whole time and we did it together.Said Gina proudly inside her head.Now the three girls were happy and had a chance on surviving.
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MeanWhile Back At Their House
Ski Donna’s daughter noticed her mom had left her purse, which inside had a phone and a credit card.She got the phone out and called the police and

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