Critical Analysis Essay

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Is structure important when we write our essay and will our essay be polished without a structure? This essay is based on one of the argumentative essays that I did for one of my subject, Language, Culture and Society. I had to go through an article entitled “There is no proper English” and state whether I agreed or disagreed with Oliver Kamm. I personally did agree with some parts of his article and disagreed with other parts because it didn’t feel right to me. I explained about how English is one of the most important languages in this generation and how much it matters no matter where you go. For this critical analysis, I will mainly focus on the structure
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There wasn’t a specific key point and does not seem to have a proper finish at the end of every body paragraph. For an example the first body paragraph that I’ve written has nothing in common with my introduction and I believe that this will make the reader unable to understand my main key point. Body passage are comprised of the few key points that are picked in any essay. Basically, with that key points, an appropriate structure ought to be connected where the reader would recognize the primary thought and the key point for every single passage. Finding the right key point and including it in the article is very important because with that key focuses it is essential to look into and set yourself questions that must be applicable to the following section. It is essential to divide the key point into segments and talk about each of them fundamentally. According to (Tredinnick, 2006) they mentioned two types of sentence structure that is the way to an appropriate body section. The first type of sentence structure would be the Segregating sentence: which is a useful for being clear in portrayal or descriptive. This sentence structure focuses on the reader 's consideration on the content and regular progression of step or activity. The second sentence is Loose sentence: which begins with the main point and this is frequently a clarification of justification. This sentence structure is useful for clarification and portrayal. Along these lines, I believe that structuring my main idea correctly will help me enhance a better body paragraph. Without a proper structuring in my paragraph that does not seem to link with the other, the reader might go on with the next

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