My paper is about the political unrest, focusing on the Berkley Riots that were sparked by political speaker, and former editor for Breitbart, Milo Yiannopolous. I initially organized my essay to be around all of the controversy surrounding President Trump, but realized that my topic was so incredibly broad. I focused upon the rioting that occurred in Berkley, California, and why they occurred, instead. This hit closer to home for me, as I live nearby . I started the essay portion with a descriptive introduction, mentioning my thesis at the end. Rather than announcing my thesis immediately, I covertly mentioned my thesis and used the issues that led up to the riot, to draw my audience in. I feel as if I was able to lure my audience into my
